You also edit as you read through.3) The last pass is to add still another sentence between every existing sentence. This is more of stage direction ...n describing what is going on around the characters as they interact.(sue) That is a very sound and interesting way of developing a story, Raven.(Raven) I urge people to try it. It works. That was written by Michael Crichton.(Elizabeth) I'm confused: I thought that authors *revise* and *editors* edit. I wish I could!(Raven) I'll volunteer. Louise and I were getting ready in the morning. As bridesmaid I had a fairly simple outfit to compliment that of Louise. I wore a shot-silk cream ankle length dress with no underwear other than hold-ups. It felt absolutely gorgeous against my skin! Louise was in white of course. She too wore no underwear other than lacy hold-ups and her dress looked superb as a full length fishtail with a short train and fluffy lace beneath to make it ride out. She sat naked ready for me to slide it over her. I did as I was asked, I didn’t feel confident enough to argue. Surely, this happened all the time? “It” must have done. I got up and bent over his desk. He moved behind me and pulled up my skirt, I had black tights on underneath but they ‘weren’t’ the very thick kind and I suspected he could see my white knickers through them. All of a sudden he was grasping at the waistband of my tights and pulling them down. The panic set in, and I started to protest. “Be a good girl, and keep. There are no third ways available." Where am I? Am I at the Mansion or at home? Can't you see that I've already made my choice?" Do you understand that there will probably be a serious vendetta between Rolf's gang and me, hopefully supported by the natives, which means that you probably have to skip his damn historic society and the Delaware trip if you join my side?" I'm still your loving wife and of course I'll support you as much as I can."Once again Emma and I had saved our marriage. There.
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